Response to constructive criticism

Constructive criticism from the group pitch
it was really successful and there some valuable feedback that we took that we can add. They spoke about adding our iuris sketch to our digipack, giving it extra effect and they also said it has a 'grungy' look about it. Linking this to the website they said the bright background of Aaron in front of the graffiti doesn't match our black and white theme. This is some useful criticism that we took are going to be helpful and we are going to include this and tweak this into our final designs.
We are now seeing some significant improvements to the website, we have been given feedback on how to make it better and we have seen other groups websites and we have taken note on how to improve ours. For example, we have found out how we can spice up the about wall and not leave it boring. In addition we are going to add the iuris sketches to the website, adding our indie touch to it.
Secondly, we are going to add a music and merchandise page to it, this will add quantity and develop our character even more.


Here is the response I have added to the website so far, I have added the iuris sketches to the background of our website, this goes with our black and white theme and it also represents our brand image considerably.